New Planeswalker

[GoblinPiledriver]

Comments are welcomed!

Yagmoth, Father of Machines   2BB
+1:Add BBB to your mana pool.
-2:Target opponent reveals his or her hand. Choose a card from it. That player discards that card.
-6:You may play up to 5 cards from your graveyard without paying their mana cost.
Loyality: 3

Squee, the reborn Hero   2RR
+1:Put a red 1/1 Goblin Token into play under your control.
-1:Squee, the reborn Hero deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
-7:Put 10 red 1/1 Goblin Token into play under your control. Goblin creatures gains haste.
Loyality: 4

Serra, the Sancitifier 3WW
+2:You gain 2 life.
-2:Until your next turn your opponents can’t play spells and prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to you.
-8:Put x white 1/1 Soldier tokens into play,  where X is your life total.
Loyality: 4

Sarkhan, Dragonmaster Outcast  2RB
+1:Sarkhan, Dragonmaster Outcast deals 1 damage to target player.
-2:Sacrifice a creature, if you do put a red 5/5 Dragon creature token into play.
-6:Each Dragon creature deals damage equal to it’s power to target player.
Loyality: 3

Urza, the great Artificier 2WUB
+1:Target opponent reveals his or her hand and you choose a nonland card from it. Exile that card. At the beginning of your next upkeep, return the exiled card to its owner’s hand,
-3:Take an extra turn after this one.
-8:Remove all permanents target player controls from the game.
Loyality: 5

Nissa, Bringer of Life 2GG
+1:Search your library for a card named Nissa’s Chosen and put it onto the battlefield. Then shuffle your library.
0:Add G to your mana pool for each Elf you control.
-1:Gain 2 Life for each elf you control.
Loyality: 3

Barrin, the Master Wizard 1UU
+1:Draw a card, then discard a card.
-2:Return target permanent to its owners hand.
-5:Draw 7 cards then untap up to seven lands.
Loyality: 2

[Mythrandir]

Barrin is clearly overpowered.

Most of these could use a little bump on the CMC.

I think Serra is balanced.

Also in custom card making, text versions are  always welcome and try not to use art that is already on cards, since it's confusing.

[GoblinPiledriver]

changed Barrin's draw abilty to a Looter ability.

Changed Squee and Urza CMC to 4 and added one loyality counter.

Decreased Yamoth's loyality to 3

I personally like the art of old cards. Why should this be confusing?

[Mythrandir]

I personally like the art of old cards. Why should this be confusing?

Well, at first glance and specially with no text versions, when i look at Urza (example) i can't stop thinking about urza's armor.. My opinion, of course, being fantasy cards everything goes.

[GoblinPiledriver]

Ok, I added text versions.

Odin, the Northern Mind 2UUU
+2:Tap target permanent, it doesn’t untap the next 2 untap phases.
-1:Draw 2 cards then discard one card from your hand.
-10:Take 2 extra turns after this turn.
Loyality: 4

Masticore, the Metalscorpion 4
+1:Put a colorless 0/1 Construct Artifact creature token into play. This creature has: “Sacrifice this creature: Prevent all combat damage that would be dealt to Masticore, the Metalscorpion.
0:Masticore, the Metalscorpion becomes a 5/5 artifact creature that’s still a planeswalker until end of turn. Target creature blocks it if able.
-7:Exile the top seven cards from your library face up. Until end of turn you may play any number of spells and lands without paying their mana cost.
Loyality: 3

Ises, Mother of the Heaven 4WWW
+2:You gain 5 life.
-2:Put a white 4/4 Angel token with flying into play.
-9:All your creatures gains vigilance, haste, flying and indestructible.
Loyality: 5

Freyalise, Keeper of the living Spore 1GG
+1:Put a 1/1 green Saproling creature token into play under your control.
0:Target creature get +3/+3 and trample until end of turn.
-7:Put X X/X green ooze creature token into play where X is the number of creatures you control.
Loyality: 2

Ephemerid, Teeth out of Nothing 1UR
+1:Ephemerid, Teeth out of Nothing deals 1 damage to target player.
0:Ephemerid, Teeth out of Nothing becomes a 4/4 blue and red Illusion creature with flying, which is still a planeswalker.
-1:Draw a card.
Loyality: 3

Chlodwig, Bearier of the Plague 1BBB
+1:Olaf, Bearier of the Plague deals 2 damage to every creature and player.
-1:Put a -1/-1 counter on every creature target player controls.
-7:Olaf, Bearier of the Plague deals 10 damage to target player. That player discards 7 cards.
Loyality: 3